Elliot says...

Why shouldn't a seven-year-old have a blog? A father poses questions and a son answers directly, honestly, and candidly with the directness, honesty, and candor that only a seven-year-old can bring. Dictated and moderated by AmsterdamAsp , these are the words of Elliot himself: simple and complex observations of the world from the mind of a six-year-old...

Saturday, October 03, 2009

The Autumn Sounds

The birds are flying in the breeze.
The leaves are shaking in the trees.

The mole
is digging his hole.

The skink
is taking his drink.

The deer
is sitting right here.

The squirrel
is going to hurl
acorns at the girl.

And I
am looking at the sky.

4 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Elliot,
I'm glad to see you blogging again. See if you can stay ahead of your Uncle Jay in the number of blogs you post.
Opa

14:30  
Blogger justmeghs said...

Nice poem Elliot!
I read it to my roommate and she is very impressed. She says she wishes she could write poetry as well as you do.
Keep it up!
~Meghan

01:21  
Blogger Naomi said...

Elliot,
So far, this poem is my favorite of all your poems! Just one question...What is a skink?

-Naomi

18:55  
Blogger Eric said...

It's a lizard. Thanks for the comment.

Elliot

19:01  

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