Could you tell me a funny story?
There once was a muffin that her name was Pogy. So... Togy! [uproarious laughter]... Then some guy... [laughing]... Someone came and kicked them... [laughing]... Someone ate them again, and then someone watched them eat it... [more laughing]...
He came down to the bottom of the sea and drinked... [laughing]... He burped underwater... [laughing very hard]... Then a tractor rolled over him... [laughing]... Then he's not alive anymore, right? Then he came down to the bottom of the sea again, and he drinked again. Then the ducks came and pecked him.... [deep belly laughter]... And he went underwater, and he burped... [laughing]...
He splashed, and then he threw himself underwater... [laughing]... And then he stinked underwater. He was stinky... [laughing]... And then he plop-plop-plopped [laughing]... Then he threw the rest of his stuff in the water.
That's funny.
[Note to reader: Even after several readings of the story, the funny parts retained their comedic effect -- especially the parts where there's drinking, and burping, and stinkiness.]
He came down to the bottom of the sea and drinked... [laughing]... He burped underwater... [laughing very hard]... Then a tractor rolled over him... [laughing]... Then he's not alive anymore, right? Then he came down to the bottom of the sea again, and he drinked again. Then the ducks came and pecked him.... [deep belly laughter]... And he went underwater, and he burped... [laughing]...
He splashed, and then he threw himself underwater... [laughing]... And then he stinked underwater. He was stinky... [laughing]... And then he plop-plop-plopped [laughing]... Then he threw the rest of his stuff in the water.
That's funny.
[Note to reader: Even after several readings of the story, the funny parts retained their comedic effect -- especially the parts where there's drinking, and burping, and stinkiness.]
posted by Eric | 15:30
3 Comments:
Hi Elliot!
Your story made me laugh!!! I especially liked the part where the muffin burped under water! I didn't even know muffins could burp! =)
Groetjes,
Marie Christine
You're funny, Elliot! You are so cool! Tell your mom and dad hi for me, okay? :) Everyone in Ohio says hi, too.
Love,
Emily :)
I like that.
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